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How to Get Published, Part 3: How to Write a Nonfiction Book Proposal

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Welcome back to the How to Get Published Series.

In traditional publishing, fiction and non-fiction are sold in two very different ways. To get an agent or sell a piece of fiction, you need to have a completed manuscript.

So if you want to write fiction, go do it and we'll meet back here for the next part, which is getting an agent (and why you want to have one).

Nonfiction is different: To get an agent or sell a work of nonfiction, you usually write what is called a book proposal and sample chapters, which is what we're going to talk about today.

The reason is pretty simple -- agents (and then publishers) are going to want to tweak and focus nonfiction projects before they're written. It's much harder to guide a project when the author has finished the book (and is holding firm to the idea that her way is the best way to relay the material to the reader). But editors will want to guide the process, because they can see a bigger picture that you can't -- namely, how readers like to receive information based on numerous past projects and past reader reactions.

Remember back when I did the roll call in Part One? It's time for you to go back there and hook up with someone else who wants to write nonfiction on a topic very unlike your own (since she'll be seeing your ideas). Feel free to form online groups of more than two and set up an Google Group to house your exchanges. Or grab someone from your face-to-face world who will read this post and then give you feedback on how well you're hitting the goals.

A book proposal is a formal piece of writing with a format that allows agents (and later, publishers) to scan the document quickly and find what they are looking for. This is not a time to get creative with format and make your proposal into a three-dimensional shoebox diorama. Give the agents exactly what they want. Consider this as important as wearing the proper attire to a meeting.

You will be judged on the look of your proposal. If it's put together in a sloppy manner, if you're recycling an old copy that was sent back to you from an agent who rejected it (but covered it first with coffee stains), or if it doesn't contain the necessary information, it doesn't matter how brilliant your idea is -- no one will want to work with you. Agents are looking for an easy reason to reject your work. Don't give it to them.

All proposals contain these parts (and this is the order I give them):

  • Overview: 5 pages or so on what the book is about (definitely could be shorter, but not longer).

    Spend a lot of time writing this part, because it's the first thing the agent reads and you want to pull them in. Do you have a shocking statistic? Put it at the front of the overview to point out how important it is that people read your book. You can start it with an anecdote. The point is to give the agent a taste of your writing style while also telling them about the book. Think of it this way: If you only had three minutes to sit down with and convince an agent to represent your book, what would you say?

    Keep the writing formal -- in other words, third person. And make sure you say how many words you predict will be in the book to give a sense of size and how long you'll need to write the book from the time you sign the contract. Use this space to get the agent excited about the project.

  • Markets for the Book: In other words, who the hell would want to buy your book? Give statistics and get creative.

    For my nonfiction infertility book, I pointed out that the book would be helpful for those experiencing infertility, but it was also a book that doctors, nurses, adoption agency directors, therapists, and family members might want to read, too. Is there a specific place/conference where your book could be sold (a biography of Dolly Parton? Might be good to sell that at Dollywood)?

  • Competitive Books: What books currently on the market would be competition for your
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Melissa Ford 5 pts

Thank you! People make it much more complicated than it needs to be. But this is all you really need to know in order to create the whole proposal.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

lyndalippin 5 pts

Seriously the clearest guide to the book proposal I have seen yet! Thank you so much. I will get an accountability partner and move forward.

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Melissa Ford 5 pts

I've also found the amount I need to prove myself less and less. My second proposal was more of a bare-bones outline with a single chapter written as the sample.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

Melissa Ford 5 pts

It's nice just having it as a template where you fill in the information. Agents really do appreciate having the information presented in an easy-to-find form.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

Virginia DeBolt 5 pts

You are building a terrific and helpful series here.

I've written 7 nonfiction books now. There are four on one topic and three on another. For the first book in each topic area, I did write a formal proposal. After that, the publisher knew what I could do and simply asked me to do it again. Once my foot was in the door, the second, third, and fourth books were more outline based. There was discussion with editors and publishers about topics and the TOC/outline, but I didn't have to prove to them that I was the right person for the topic.

That means the proposal is the most important thing you write. It starts you on the path. When you've been accepted once, future books become more possible.

Virginia DeBolt
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Just_Margaret 5 pts

I've done a bit of research on proposals, and truly appreciate having this info in one spot, and coming from someone who's been through the process.

I know that I'll be referring back to this post regularly as I pull my proposal together.

Thanks so much!

~Margaret

Just Margaret ( http://maurhoffbarney.blogspot.com )

Melissa Ford 5 pts

I'm glad you're joining along! And feel free to pick my brain. That's the benefit of a blog set-up--you get to ask questions and have them answered as they pop into your head.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

Melissa Ford 5 pts

Absolutely agree, and there's space for both in the world of books. We just need to be careful not to mix the two together and pretend they're one and the same. I think self-publishing is a better fit for fiction if the person has a particularly strong platform or for non-fiction that is of personal use (within a class, for example).

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

Diana 5 pts

I hadn't seen the NPR link yet and enjoyed reading it. Even with experience just in working with editors for articles there is a very clear distinction between self-publishing and being published. I enjoy both equally, but I think no matter how far self-developed platforms come, online and off, writers will always seek the experience and validation of being published by another. It's not a dying industry, it's just an evolving one. And that's a good thing.

Diana

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Diana 5 pts

I've read multiple books on this subject; spent hours pouring over book proposal templates; read many, many opinions on the best way to write an overview; etc, etc, etc. Nothing can replace having this dialogue from someone you've come to respect and "know" as a writer though. I just found the series tonight but will be following along as it progresses.

Diana

http://www.dianaprichard.com

Melissa Ford 5 pts

Well, there's a big difference between published and self-published. Self-published is the equivalent to writing a blog or printing out a Word Doc and taking it to Kinkos. No one who does this can use the term "publish" honestly. Publishing is a process where multiple people shape a project and make it marketable, factual, and interesting. Anyone who has worked with a publisher knows how little their work resembles their original project by the time it goes to print. And that's a good thing. We are often too close to our work to truly judge it and shape it. In the same way that I wouldn't cut my own hair, I also wouldn't try to edit my own work.

So while there are new methods, I wouldn't say that they're a good fit for everybody.

MJ Rose (who has self-published and traditionally published books) had a piece about this on NPR yesterday: http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?story...

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

QiSoftware 5 pts

Getting published?

Yesterday, I was reading a thread on MediaBristro which discussed the fact writers are dumping their agents. The Internet offers a new dynamic for writers-- sell and promote your own writings.

It appears, new ways are being discovered through the Internet.

The other problem-- the Internet offers so much to read. If you have something to say, that's interesting-- you really do not need a hard sell these days-- another reason to pass on a publisher.

New ways to get published?

Regina-- Q's Wire ( http://qblog.qisoftware.com/ ) | WiredPages ( http://wiredpages.qisoftware.com/ )

Melissa Ford 5 pts

Thank you! I hope this information helps. Plus, I like the blogging aspect so I can answer questions as they come up.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

Melissa Ford 5 pts

I organized mine with clearly distinct and labeled categories. Up until the chapter summaries, I had some fluidity of the sections, with each new part clearly titled with a bold font such as "Overview." I would leave a space or two after the overview and then start the next section on the same page, but with a bold title. It gave the agent easy access to whatever information she was trying to locate quickly.

Then I wrote the table of contents on its own page and each chapter summary began on a new page. If I went two lines over onto the next sheet, I left the rest of the page blank and started a new piece of paper for the next chapter. Does that make sense?

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens ( http://stirrup-queens.com ) and Lost and Found ( http://lostandfoundandconnectionsabound.blogspot.c... ). Her book is Navigating the Land of If ( http://thelandofif.blogspot.com/ ).

miguelina 5 pts

This is an excellent post. I've just bookmarked it. Thank you for sharing so much knowledge with us!

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lilkidthings 5 pts

I am so impressed with these tutorials! My book will be non-fiction so this is extremely helpful. A question about the details; should each of these sections be separated by a title page or more of a fluid paragraph format? Mainly thinking about lists of resources, media etc. Do they want to see bullet points or stories about why they are worthwhile?

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