NaBloPoMo Poetry Contest: Villanelles

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Welcome back to another poetry contest. In honour of NaBloPoMo's April theme -- POEM -- as well as National Poetry Month, we're trying our hand at four types of fixed form poems. Fixed form poetry is meant to free the mind by providing a structure much in the same way a house frees the person who lives inside to focus on things other than the elements outside. The second form we're going to look at is the villanelle.

The villanelle is a French form shaped by two rhyme sounds, a fixed meter*, and repetition. Because of its difficulty, we're going to give you almost two weeks to write one.

One of the easiest poems to look at in order to understand the form is Dylan Thomas's "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" from 1952's In Country Sleep. In order to understand the form, all we need are the first two stanzas:

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Before we get to the rhyme scheme -- which is the best-known aspect of the villanelle -- let's look at the meter, or the rhythm of the line. Just like music, poetry can have a set number of "beats" to a line, which is why poetry teachers often read poems aloud, having their class clap out the words to hear the inflections.

Villanelles and sonnets are written in iambs which are an unstressed beat coupled with a stressed beat: or ba-BUM. With the words "do not" in the first line, the "do" is soft and unstressed, whereas the voice lands harder on the word "not." But the line obviously is longer than one iamb or two beats. It actually has five iambs strung together, which is why we say it is written in iambic pentameter. Iambic refers to the foot -- the way the words are stressed -- and pentameter is the length of the line: penta means five.

So now clap out that first line as you read it aloud, and you'll hear the meter:

do NOT go GEN-tle IN-to THAT-good NIGHT
Got that?

There are many other types of poetic feet -- such as trochee, spondee, pyrrhic anapest, amphibrach and dactyl -- and many other forms of line length --monometer, dimeter, trimeter, tetrameter, pentameter, hexameter, heptameter, octameter -- but those are all lessons for the future. Just wanted to point out that while iambic pentameter is popular and Shakespeare was in love with this line length, it isn't the only meter that exists in poetry.

Okay, so now we need to look at the rhyme scheme. There are only two end-rhyme sounds (meaning, the last sound in the line) in a villanelle. Usually, when we write out a rhyme scheme, we use letters of the alphabet - a, b, or c -- and we mean that all of the "a"s are the same rhyme sound: cat, hat, bat, mat. But a villanelle is different because we need to account for the fact that there are rhyme sounds and there are repeating lines and the rhyme sounds sometimes match the repeating lines.

Confusing.

So let's pull apart those first two stanzas in order to understand.

Do not go gentle into that good night, (A)
Old age should burn and rave at close of day; (c)
Rage, rage against the dying of the light. (B)

Though wise men at their end know dark is right, (a)
Because their words had forked no lightning they (c)
Do not go gentle into that good night. (A)

I've used uppercase and lowercase letters to mark the rhyme scheme. The capital letters refer to a repeating line. The lowercase letters refer to a repeating sound. Sometimes, the repeating sound is the same sound as the one used in the repeating line, so they use the same letter but are written in lowercase.

Stay with me -- this looks confusing right now but will be clear in a moment.

The first and third line of the first stanza become the repeating lines. In the case of Thomas's poem, the two lines that keep repeating throughout the poem are

Do not go gentle into that good night

and

Rage, rage, against the dying of the light

You will see those two lines pop back up as the third line in each subsequent stanza as well as form the final two lines of the poem in the quatrain. (A quatrain is just a shmancy way of saying that four line ending stanza. It's different from the tercets -- or three line stanzas -- that are used in the rest of the poem.)

From that point on, the first line in each stanza will rhyme with "night" or "light," hence why I marked it with a lowercase "a." Whenever you see that lowercase "a," it's a word that ends with that "ight" sound. Whenever you see the uppercase A (or B), it's a complete repetition of that A or B line. So yes, the A and B lines rhyme, even though they are written with two different letters.

And what about the "c" line? The middle line of the first stanza is the "c" line that is a repeating sound throughout the poem. In this case, the word is "day," and the subsequent words used are they, bay, way, gay, and pray. Every time you see that lowercase "c," the line rhymes with that first lowercase "c."

The poetic form then can be written as such:

A
c
B

a
c
A

a
c
B

a
c
A

a
c
B

a
c
A
B

If you want to take a look at some other popular villanelles, take a look at my favourite -- Sylvia Plath's "Mad Girl's Love Song." Other good ones are Elizabeth Bishop's "One Art" and Theodore Roethke's "The Waking."

Pretty cool, right?

So now comes the big question: who wants to try their hand at writing a villanelle? To enter,

  • Write a villanelle between now and Wednesday, April 18th at 1 pm EST.
  • Post it on your blog or on BlogHer as a member post.
  • Submit the post url using this form.
  • If you are chosen, your poem will run on BlogHer, be featured in the newsletter and via social media sites, and we'll pay you $50 to run the post.

So get writing!

Photo Credit: Open Book via Shutterstock.


*Meter is one of the arguing factors in a villanelle. Purists call for iambic pentameter, but it is still considered kosher to not incorporate a certain meter into your villanelle, giving much greater weight to the rhyme, repetition, and construction of tercets (with a quatrain). But for the sake of this exercise, try your hand at iambic pentameter. I think it actually makes it easier to have that lilt carry your word choice.

Melissa writes Stirrup Queens and Lost and Found. Her novel about blogging is Life from Scratch.

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